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This is something I made up while eating some Mcdonalds.

Name: Magrahar Talonslash
Age:???
Bio: Magrahar was once a beggar in the dirty markets of Baren, a city in the lands of Veriness. One day, when he was but 10, he was approached by a mysterious man in a robe, his face covered in a hood.

"Hello, young child..." The man said, in a raspy voice, but denoted evil intention.
"Whattya want, old man?" The young Magrahar said. "If you're not gonna give me any money, just get away."
"Insolent whelp... ugh, anyways. I offer you great power." The man looked to be smiling under his hood.
The young Magrahar looked skeptical. "There's a catch, isn't there?"
The old man chuckled a light, yet slightly evil, chuckle. "You'll never know, unless you say yes."
"Well..." Magrahar closed his eyes, thinking. "Yes."
The old man began to cackle. The bustling market around them disappeared.
Magrahar backed up, and hit an invisible barrier. "What's going on old man? You lied to me!"
"I never lied, young one." The old man ripped off his robe to reveal a woman. Her voice had changed to match her body as well.
A purple ray of energy from her hand shot at the young Magrahar. It lifted him into the air. Energy shout out of his eyes and mouth.

He fell with a loud clanking. He was now taller than before, and sounded older as well. He looked up, his face hidden under a purple helmet.

"WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME?!?!" He charged at the woman, but was stopped by the same invisible energy as before, and then shot backwards by another bolt from her hand.

"Uh uh, little Magrahar. If you want to leave my power, with all the wealth you could desire, listen to me well. If you wish to die, fail me." The lady laughed hysterically.
Magrahar was still trapped by the energy. He stopped struggling. "Y-yes, mistress."
"Good. Now remember, I am Relix. I am your mistress. Now address me as such."
She shot another bolt at him. He shouted in pain.

"Y-yes... Mistress Relix."
-END-

That took a while. Hope you liked it, and thanks for reading.

PLEASE DON'T COPY

Or at least ask for permission to change it up and stuff, or you could help me by giving me a pixel of Mistress Relix. I'm not very amazing at pixel art, so if anyone wants to help me, thanks a lot.